Artist 2 be

Just finished this last evening.
The word Artist was using Toothpicks. but I painted it wif Acrylic Paint & doodle it a lil wif green ink.

Aint too happy wif it. Felt tt something is missing. My SB mates over in M4M gave me advises tt its cos everything is too equal. & I think they are rite. Seems like dun hv focal pt! :(